The transitions in particular were excellent. Overall really well done.
I worked hard on that part.
You didn't make this.
Slapstick + Overwatch works really well.
that end bit as well was a nice touch
(iunno what else to put here I already gave you feedback on discord lel)
Thx again bby <3!
The only thing that took me by surprise was how simplified the character designs were compared to the rest of the animation, but even then everything else's animation quality was solid. Plus the contrast in designs lend themselves to the contrasting themes of 'adventure! action! ... nevermind it's f*cking nothing!' that the game itself managed to create.
Dunno if the vaporization joke at the end was needed. Dunno really what the goal of that last gag was, you could've probably just ended with the guy hijacking the ship and the yellow character watching him fly off. Didn't have a negative effect on anything, though. Well done overall.
The character designs are simple sketches since I produced this entire thing in only 4 days. I typically pen tool and make way more detailed designs but that takes me months! Thanks for the review :)
The physics in the fall/break really stood out to me, nicely done
Not bad. Fox's audio is a bit hard to hear though.
Can't tell if it's the resolution or what but the outlines are really fuzzy. Movements could probably be more exaggerated as well, feels a bit stiff.
'salright. Girl on girl stuff can be kinda tricky to make interesting cause movements are gonna be more subtle (or won't wind up showing much) which sucks
The girl on the left's breasts seem to be moving a bit too much for their size, though.
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